how to do good comments

Today i was with James and was teaching us how to do better commenting on blogs, so this is it.

James let us on his pad let app, not to be confused with an iPad or something it is a app on the computer,
 Most of the time people give feedback like i like your punctuation but make sure not to do to many and's.

Created with Padlet

  

The Cats and the Trees

Here is my creative writing test,; in cartoons cats always seem fine when they are up trees but this is a story of cats going up trees and when the cat gets up the tree it has the opposite effect on the cat.

The cats and the Trees

One night in the USA one cat ran up a very big old tree which has been there more than 100 years , the cat was chasing a mouse around the bushes, the mouse went up a tree and so the cat did but the cat lost the the mouse and got stuck.

Jake and Joe were on a job and there were two cats in a tree which made it even harder and what made it even harder when another call came in that there was a cat that was very sick which was nearby.

We tried to get the cat back to the ground but it jumped right onto a fence, we went over to the fence and the fence was all bloody and the cat was on top of it, we all knew what we had to happen, we had to put him out of his misery, we got a gun, we aimed the gun at the cat’s head.

                                                      !!BANG!!

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